In the middle of this sky bridge
In which I could see clearly some palm trees around
If you were here, you might be agree
The city that bright with thousand of lights in Eid Mubarak
Now is in silent with hundred of shocks, mourning, weep and uncertainty
This is a part of Melbourne, Caulfield in the last days of Ramadhan
Really, I could see and feel Baghdad.
The story of this 1001 night’s city remains
Remain in sorrow to me
If only you were here
In this sky bridge with me
puisi yang bagus, dengan kesan yang mendalam... n I can feel bagdad through your poetry.
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